Vengeance Among the Dead – A Lullaby for the Murdered

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byChrisWhite – 2025

Originally intended for a flash fiction piece I never submitted, inspired by actual historical events. April 28, 2025.

The men who governed Nashville had not sought a city cemetery when they turned their covetous eyes toward the eleven-hundred acre Poplar Hill. What they wanted was stone, the hard muscle of the earth itself, and the sweet water spring that bled from the cavern mouth. They cared little for the history stitched into the land, nor the White family who once bent their knees upon it as pioneers. Progress demanded sacrifice, and in those years, the old gods and old families alike were made to kneel to the sword of progress.

Yet the quarries proved unprofitable. The railroad intended to cut through it curved away, indifferent. And so the fields lay fallow, worked by tenant hands, while the old brick house, the White’s house, fell into ruin, repurposed as the City Pest House, where men and women rotted by the inches under the polite fiction of medical care.

Death grew fat there. It loitered in doorways and crept beneath bedclothes. Yet here, death wore a stranger face, neither the gory martyrdom of battle nor the hellfire shriek of the pulpit. It was a quieter thing. Death promised relief. Death promised hope. It beckoned not as an end but as a threshold, and it became, perversely, something like beautiful.

In the slow decay of seasons, a question arose: should the dead not be given ground worthy of them? Should they not lie beneath the open sky, among groves and waters, rather than the festering yards that birthed disease? The city fathers, practical men all, had no poetry in their bones. But in late 1839, perhaps by chance, perhaps by providence, they set in motion a thing larger than themselves.

Montgomery Cobb, engineer by trade and dreamer by nature, laid his gaze upon Poplar Hill and saw not wasteland, but hallowed ground. He had walked the gardens of Paris, seen the new vision of burial born in the mind of John Claudius Loudon, cemeteries not as charnel pits, but as sanctuaries, where the living might commune with the dead and find in their silence something close to salvation.

Cobb’s voice carried conviction, and the city fathers, whose imaginations were otherwise chained to ledgers and contracts, gave their reluctant assent. The quarries would remain abandoned; the hills would cradle the dead. Winding paths would trace the contours of the land like veins through a body. Ponds would gather the sky in their black mirrors. Trees not native to Tennessee would rise from the earth like votive offerings.

Here, the dead would not be disturbed. Here, no shovel or knife would defile their rest for the sake of medical anatomy or curiosity. Their peace would be absolute; free of sully or defile.

In time, wealth gilded grief. Families with money erected monuments that screamed their sorrow in permanence; marble and granite replaced cheap sandstone and ornamental wood. Landscapers stitched exotic trees into the fertile Tennessee soil, and Poplar Hill became a garden cemetery, a place where sorrow dressed itself in grandeur, where the living strolled among the dead as though paging through a book of lives better lived, envious of the various granite and marble embodiments.

But Cobb had not forgotten. Beneath all the new sorrow, the old sorrow slept.

It was said, softly, when the wind was high, that Cobb had made a promise to the last of the Whites. That their graves, unmarked and forsaken, would not be lost. No stones bear their names. No iron fences encircle their dust. But among the careful maps Cobb drew, there is a space, a garden without headstones, preserved when all else was reimagined. There, it is whispered, the White family dreams.

But not all dreams are gentle.

It began with rumors, the kind that tremble on the lips of the drunk and the superstitious. A soldier in tattered blue, wreathed in the ruin of war, haunting the walks and shaded knolls of Poplar Hill. Always the same: a blow to the back of the neck so sudden it snapped the breath from the lungs, then the smokey figure appearing before them, wild-haired, blood-drenched, bayonet in hand, spitting fury through blood-blackened teeth: “Go to Hell, turncoat bastard! I’ve just killed you.”

It would have been dismissed, madness, hysteria, if not for the sameness of the victims.

All hailed from the backcountry of South Carolina. All bore bloodlines that led back to a single man, “Bloody Bill” William Cunningham, a former patriot, turned loyalist of England, blackened by history for the cowardly atrocities he inflicted on American patriots and civilians dead. History buried their sins; the White’s of Poplar Hill did not.

Josh Carney, a man with a soldier’s bearing and a scholar’s soul, took it upon himself to unravel the truth. He unearthed the records, the letters, the confessions penned in guilty hands. What he found hollowed him: a tale of vengeance dressed as war, of a family, father, mother, four children; his family slaughtered in cold blood near King’s Mountain, not for strategy, but for evil doing.

But Col. Thaddeus White fashioned a new family. A type of kinship, not just from blood, but from the hard sacrament of beginning again. Out west, a new state, Tennessee, beyond the reach of old graves and grudges, where the evolving map curled westward like a beckoning finger, lay Poplar Hill—a tract of wilderness deeded for a war fought by ghosts, it’s real heroes barely remembered. It was no more than a rise in the land and a thicket of hardwoods, but there, in the loam thick with promise and the rot of destiny, he built the first shape of belonging. The land did not ask for titles or lineage, only toil. And so it was there, beneath the cathedral hush of poplars, that his second life began.

“I knew him the moment I saw him,” Carney wrote, voice heavy with grief. “Murder has a face. It marks you, not with words but with certainty. You feel it in your marrow. You know you are prey.”

One hundred ten souls, and counting, have fled Poplar Hill, driven by the same vision, the same whispered command. They do not return. Some say they carry the curse home with them. Others say they have paid their debt, and that is mercy enough.

At Poplar Hill, the grass grows thick over old wounds. The wind hums its dark lullaby through the cedar limbs and popcorn umbels of Hemlock. And if you walk the paths alone, after the last mourners have gone home, you may find yourself standing before a man who has been dead these many hundred years, but whose hatred for a backstabber burns hotter than any fire the living could conjure.

He is waiting still.

And he remembers.

Responses

  1. mjeanpike Avatar

    Beautifully written, Chris, and oh so chilling! I could not stop reading. You should submit this!

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      I missed the deadline, editing. Just wasn’t doing what I wanted it to do. But I liked the story so I kept playing with it until I liked it. Thank you for your vote of confidence.

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  2. Willie Torres Jr. Avatar

    Haunting, poetic, and powerful. History laced with vengeance, and the land never forgets.

    Liked by 4 people

    1. Chris White Avatar

      Thanks Willie.

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  3. Warren R. Johnson Avatar

    Where I come from, not only are the visitors to the cemetery silent, so are those sleeping in peace. There is no new life here. It is closed for business. It outgrew itself. The hush floating over the markers is only interrupted by the swaying of the tree leaves. You might whisper if you visit, but the lush grounds no longer welcome visitors. What has come after no longer relates to what went before.

    Now, even this town in a valley seems to be full. It has had to climb the hills surrounding it and spread itself out upon the open plains. Perhaps a new cemetery has sprung up to welcome the newly deceased. There is not likely to be any hush floating over the markers here. Instead, a torrent of wind undoubtedly blows over, causing the grass to sway. This new cemetery now welcomes both visitors and inhabitants.

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      If I were looking for one in which to live my eternal afterlife, I would prefer the cemetery in your backyard to my own, Warren.

      It sounds far more peaceful.

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  4. Diana L Forsberg Avatar

    Beautifully written and haunting. I always wonder what secrets are buried in old cemeteries when I walk through them. So much history lost to time.

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      Thank you Diana.

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  5. Mark Avatar

    Haunting and beautiful, Chris

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      Thank you Mark.

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  6. Violet Lentz Avatar

    Whew that’s some wonderful story telling Chris. I love this.

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      Thank you. Your comments are always so appreciated.

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  7. Rosaliene Bacchus Avatar

    A gripping tale, Chris.

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      Thanks Rosaliene.

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  8. Jessica Jone Avatar

    Thank you for reading my blog recently—I truly appreciate your time.
    Whether your week is moving full speed ahead or you’re easing into a quieter rhythm, I hope you find a moment to recharge and refocus. Sometimes, just pausing to take a deep breath can be the reset we didn’t know we needed.

    Here’s to staying grounded, moving forward, and trusting the path ahead—1 goal at a time.
    – JJ1

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      Thank you Jessica.

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  9. YaYa’s World Avatar

    try well written

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      Thank you very much.

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  10. Michelle Smith Avatar

    I started to read this the other night when a storm was brewing, my husband and man-child were out until early morning and I was home alone. I got 2 paragraphs in and I couldn’t do it! I was afraid I wouldn’t sleep that night! 😅 Glad I came back…eerie but enjoyable. Well done!

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      Thank you for sharing your experience Michelle. I so glad you enjoyed it. Yeah, I do get it. It started off a bit more severe. I distilled those bits down to its current temperature just to make it more easily digestible—principally because of the short wordcount.

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    2. Toluwani Majaro Avatar

      Great way to relax

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  11. akshyut Avatar

    It’s written in a very beautiful way. I also wanna be a writer, it helped me , because I saw good writing. Thanks man

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      Thank you sir. I really appreciate your kind words of encouragement. My writing has definitely evolved, but it’s been deliberate—the result of many years of practice. I prefer reading old-school, dark, lyrical prose. So I’m drawn to emulate the styles of my favorite authors.
      Some people prefer a more straightforward and direct approach to storytelling, and won’t enjoy reading my prose. I get that we all have our preferences.
      But I’m very thankful for you today, as someone who appreciates the work I’ve done in developing a style that still resonates with a lot of people.
      I’m confident that you too will achieve your goals. Which may be different than my own, but nonetheless uniquely styled. You’re a storyteller at heart, I see that. Putting yourself and your efforts in front of others—strangers of the world—is a great way to grow. It’s exactly what I did a decade ago. Our families can be supportive, but our growth comes from repetition and honesty.
      Reading is an excellent way to grow your skills. Find authors whose voices resonate with you, and study their story structures and prose. Ask yourself, “why did he say it that way,” “why that verb choice,” etc.
      Good luck on your journey, and stay in touch.

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  12. Wiselovehope Avatar

    It’s so deep. Thank you.

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  13. Lin Zeng Avatar

    Greetings,

    As usual your article is not so hard to read (some of the things on the Internet using the word that is out of norm)

    However, It did take a bit time for me.

    The war and criminals were alike a man under heaven. We all did something wrong.

    The old time was being there to tell us, the future is likewise. Unless we ourselves change. How God did to them was to send a peaceful priest to tell them : There are salvation if you like to go to heaven after all you had done.

    No. They replied.

    Peace be with you.

    The story is not ended.
    We are the same person who needs afterlife, a life that means eternal and meaningful.
    A mind governed by flesh is killing, a mind governed by spirit of Jesus lord, is life and everlasting peace.

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      Thank you sir.

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  14. pk 🌍 Educación y más. Avatar

    Beautifully written ❤️

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      I really appreciate your kind comment.

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  15. Owen Fortune Avatar

    very clean writing, excellent read

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  16. Toluwani Majaro Avatar

    A great and inspirational quote my dear Chris. Thanks for liking and subscribing to my website. I really appreciate

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      You’re welcome and thank you.

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      1. Toluwani Majaro Avatar

        😊👌😂💯

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