The Last Mile from Black Bluff

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4–6 minutes

byChrisWhite – 2025

Another flash-fiction southern gothic piece set in east Tennessee in 1890, a young family loses their mother and must make a long journey up the mountain to bury her in her family’s burial grounds. The brutality of poor rural Appalachian life, such as we’ve never experienced, those hardships no more dramatic than what a family must do in the summer heat when a loved one dies.

They come up the last mile slow, the wagon wheels cutting into the hardpan ruts of the station road, the mule team lathered and swaying against the traces, their hides streaked with foam and dust. The coffin rides high on the bed, under a canvas darkened with death’s seepage, the stink of it outpacing the wagon, lashed under a tarpaulin that does little to quiet the smell. Thirty-six miles from Black Bluff, Tennessee, all of it uphill, through switchbacks where shale rolls underfoot and the timber crowds the road in close. By the time they crest into Jefferson Station the light is thin and the wind carries the last of the day’s heat off Opossum Mountain.

No one speaks. The boy, thirteen and near wild-eyed from the strain of the trip, rides behind on the tailboard, his boots knocking on the axle and his hands locked white on the boards to keep from pitching into the road. The break is still fresh, but he will not be left out of the work. His brother walks alongside, one hand on the coffin’s side, as if to steady it against the heave of the wagon though the ropes are tight as drum cord. Their sister sits forward on the bench beside their father, her eyes fixed on the road’s vanishing point, as if she might will it to be shorter.

The station is no more than a warehouse, a sidetrack, and two stores fronting a bare patch of ground where wagons turn. When they draw up before the dry goods store, the crowd is already out. Men from the warehouse, women with aprons dusted from their kitchens, children pulled back by the arm. No one speaks. The smell works its way into their faces, into the cloth at their throats. The father climbs down slow and tells them to bring her out.

The coffin is lifted down and set in the dirt. The boy feels all eyes on them and keeps his head low. The father wipes his brow and tells the sister to tend her brother. She does not move.

Inside the warehouse, the eldest brother is seated on a straightback chair with his trouser leg cut away, his bare shin swollen and black in places. The break is plain. A man in a leather apron crouches over it with a pail of water and a sack of cement. He works without comment, mixing the powder in a shallow pan, the dust rising in the late light.

“You ain’t got a proper splint?” the father asks.

The man in the apron never looks up. “This’ll hold.”

The eldest says nothing, only grips the edge of the chair as the man applies the wet mixture over his leg, shaping it quick before it hardens. The father watches until the work is done, his jaw set. Outside, the coffin rests under the tarpaulin, and the crowd has not moved off.

The smell deepens as the sun slides down. Someone spits in the dust. A woman murmurs to a child and draws him away. The boy sees the sister still fixed in her seat on the wagon, her hands folded tight in her lap, her face without expression, ignoring the rancid odor out of respect for her mother.

When the eldest hobbles out on a makeshift crutch, the cement already whitening in the air, he takes his place beside the coffin without being told. The father stands with him. For a moment there is no sound but the creak of leather and the ticking of the cooling wagon wheels.

The boy hobbles to the wagon bed, jaw set against the flare of pain. The eldest takes one end, the father the other, and the boy wedges himself between, under the weight. His crutch lies in the dust. They lift the coffin again and shoulder it toward the rise beyond the station where the family burying ground lies. The box is heavier than he expected, the load bearing down on the bone gone crooked inside the cast. He grits his teeth, his breath hard through his nose.

They carry her past the still faces, up the narrow track to the rise behind the station where the burying ground waits. The grass there is high, the fence leaning, the stones tilted with age. The boy’s arms burn, the broken leg trembling under him, each step an act of will. The stench rises warm from the blackened boards, flies steadily feasting at the sodden boards, transferring the evidence of their feast to young faces and arms and clothes.

The path is narrow, the grass high and bent in the evening wind. At the top of the hill a small fence rings the stones, most of them leaning, names and dates worn shallow. At the open hole they stop. No words are spoken. The father rests his hand on the lid, his thumb tracing the grain where the canvas has been peeled back. Then they lower her down, the rope rasping in their hands. The boy leans forward on the edge of the grave, watching the box sink into shadow until it is no longer visible, only the smell remaining.

No preacher stands by, no mourners save those who brought her here.

The father takes up the shovel. The first dirt falls in a muted thud, the sound carried off in the wind. The boy stands on his good leg, the bad one aching in its stone shell, and grips the fence rail to steady himself. He knows that by morning there will be no sign of her beyond the mound, the packed earth, and the weight of what they carried up that hill.

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  1. Kevin McCarthy Avatar

    Moving. Loved it.
    Kevin

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      Thanks Kevin.

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  2. Diana L Forsberg Avatar

    It is a very touching, sad story.

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      Thank you Diana.

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  3. mountainwitchy Avatar

    heartbreaking but deeply human and beautifully written.

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  4. lamarrwenrich Avatar

    Beautifully written 💕

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  5. Warren R. Johnson Avatar

    I swear, you must have lived a previous life. How your imagery can be so vivid otherwise, I don’t know. You write like you’ve been there and then brought us along. Incredible. Beyond that, you’ve taught me another new word: drum cord. I had to look it up. May you never stop writing.

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      Haha, well, I kept a secret I guess. I’ve been a drummer, among other things, for 50 years. It’s just common vernacular for me, albeit foreign to some. So you’ll know, it’s a cord used to attach snare wires to a snare drum. The thing that makes it sound tight and bright—unique among the other drums which resonate in various lower tones. And when stretched to the closed position; extremely tight.
      Thank you for your reliable positivity. I always light up when I see you’ve left a note of support.

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      1. Warren R. Johnson Avatar

        Thanks for offering both education and enlightenment.

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  6. chameleon15026052 Avatar

    This hits like a hammer — not because it tries to shock, but because it doesn’t. You’ve caught the quiet brutality of Appalachian life without dressing it up, letting the hardship speak through the details: the stink of the coffin, the weight of the box on a broken leg, the cement cast mixed in a warehouse like patching a wall. It’s the kind of story where dignity is measured not in words but in labor, and grief is something you carry uphill until your body gives way. The restraint is what makes it powerful — no preacher, no sermon, just a family and the dirt. That last line lingers: the weight isn’t just in the coffin, but in what they’ll carry long after the grave is filled.

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      Thank you very much!

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  7. Violet Lentz Avatar

    Such a vividly written scene. Bravo! The smell permeates the piece- in fact I think I read it with my face all squinched up!

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      I’m a proud papa!

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  8. atimetoshare.me Avatar

    Your words bring this piece to life in all is raw reality. I truly admire your talent,

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      Thank you so much!

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  9. tidalscribe.com Avatar

    A very moving piece that will stay with me. Wonderful imagery that portrays lives that are hard in every way from the journey and the broken leg to the absence of a priest or any other mourners.

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      Thank you so much.

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  10. edmondslance Avatar

    Strong image. Words even more powerful. We should count our lucky stars for the trivialities we endure.

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      I agree. Thank you.

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  11. sandysbookaday Avatar

    Superb writing, Chris. I can only echo the sentiments of those who have commented before me.

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      Thank you Sandy. I really appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts.

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  12. joannerambling Avatar

    I really liked this

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    1. Chris White Avatar

      Thank you Joanne!

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