byChrisWhite – 2025
NOTE: The following is a fictional scene that presupposes the idea that the prophesies of Revelation have already occurred, an idea with the name Preterism. I did’t write it to preach the idea, nor do I support that belief necessarily, it’s just new to me. I actually overheard the idea for the first time at the breakfast table, and immediately thought that I would explore it to find out why some people believe it. Then… I wrote about it.
Rome burned exquisitely that summer night, a delirious red bloom upon the earth’s darkened face. Nero stands on the balcony of the Domus Aurea, his excited pupils wide as coins, reflecting on a thousand licking tongues of flame. He lifts his chin, relishing in the scents of burning cedar and the sharp stench of scorched human desperation that trails wretchedly in the night air.
They would call him beast, madman, destroyer. He would wear their curses as laurels, accepting each epithet like the lover’s bruised kiss. History, he knew, would be written by trembling hands, hands that carve prophecies from fear and loathing. Nero beams, grasping at the raw delight in Rome’s chaos, in the great undoing of a city built on hubris and deceit.
“Behold, my Christian Revelation,” he whispers, and in his voice lives pure, undisputable darkness and a type of dispassionate triumph that invites fear and uncertainty.
Below him, men and women scurry like insects under overturned stones. Flames claw at stone arches, devouring marble, turning monuments of arrogance to dust. Nero see’s not tragedy but truth: Rome, the Babylonian harlot, stripped and exposed, punished by its own vanity and sin. The cries rising through smoke-stained skies mingle with visions, unbidden yet relentless, visions of fiery chariots, beasts born of our nightmares, and an endless abyss yawning wide beneath humanity’s feet.
Yet even now, at the crest of his dark victory, Nero feel’s an unease coiled tight in his chest. He understands the whispers. He proudly accepts them. He believes they named him Antichrist, the beast foretold by the ancient Judean texts. What was prophecy but the cruel gaze of hindsight, the desperate attempt to bind the present horrors in threads spun long ago? Yet Nero laughs softly, defiantly, as if he alone understands that evil is not born of supernatural darkness but from human hearts besmirched by power, greed, and despair. He gladly accepts their name.
From the horizon, messengers bring frantic tidings from Judea. Jerusalem stood defiant, a city swollen fat with rebellion. The very name tasted bitter, an open sore festering beneath his rule. His fingers tighten on the balcony rail. He had dreamt of their utter ruin, the final act in a drama written before his birth, a revelation of wrath and judgment that would silence the prophets and vindicate his fury.
“Emperor,” came a hesitant voice, sodden with reverent dread. He turned, seeing Tigellinus framed in shadow. “Jerusalem…”
“Let it burn,” Nero commanded. “Let the prophecy fulfill this glorious moment.”
Skies above Rome bled crimson, smoke veiling the stars like funeral shrouds. Nero closes his eyes and witnesses, yonder the smoke and ruin, the anguished faces of prophets, priests, and madmen. He feels the ancient dominion of the scrolls they clutch, inked in visions of plagues, seals broken by divine wrath, and bowls poured in judgment upon an unrepentant Earth. And in that instant, that stained moment of pure evil, Nero senses an eternal hand pressing him straight toward destiny, an unwilling yet complicit instrument of cosmic vengeance.
Nero opens his eyes yet again, Rome stretches out before him in torturous splendor, a kingdom fashioned in fire and despair. And deep within his flame-annealed heart, an insatiable hunger stirs, a gluttonous thirst not merely to witness the Christian’s Revelation but to become it.



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No violin? :) or is that fable? I am unfamiliar with the word Preterism. I can’t help but wonder if this is the status of the world today or where we’re headed.
My favorite line is: Below him, men and women scurry like insects under overturned stones. Mass hysteria!
For a concept new to you, your creativity really shines through. You are an exceptional writer.
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Thank you Warren. Honestly, I’d never knew there were people with an ideological bend toward the idea that Nero was the antichrist and revelation has already come and gone. New to me. But Nero isn’t particularly difficult to write about. A deep well. We both learned a new word this week. Yay.
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All roads lead to Rome hahaha excellent short fiction, love it. Seems we outdid ourselfs with modern states and stuff alike after Bizant. A change is needed.
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Thank you Franjo.
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Hadn’t heard of Preterism. Belief, religion, anything aside … the depiction is great and vivid. Great read.
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Thank you Cynthia.
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This is such a vivid, chilling piece of writing. The imagery is cinematic, and the way you weave historical detail with apocalyptic undertones is hauntingly effective. You’ve brought Nero’s darkness to life in a way that lingers.
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Thank you so much. I’m so happy I discovered a fellow holler dweller who enjoys reading and writing gothic stories. Looking forward to devouring your writing.
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Whether or one believes in the idea of Preterism, you created a vivid, interesting story!
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Thanks Diana. Yeah, I don’t think I’m on that train but it’s still a shiny, sparkly thing to play with.
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The piece is chilling in its unrepentant brutality but it is also beautiful because it searches a human heart every one named as a villain.
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Thank you for your kind words.
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Love the post! Thank you for being my first subscriber on my new website!
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You’re welcome. I’m very impressed with your achievements at such a young age. Like you, I began reading and writing long before I entered first grade, but not near as young as you were. I look forward to watching you continue to flourish.
Chris
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Thank you for the kind, thoughtful words!
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Stunning, chilling portrayal with unfortunate resonance to today’s politics. Gorgeous prose.
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Thank you!
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Chris, this is a magnificent piece. Your literary imagery is much more vivid than the art rendition can capture.
Have you ever read The Damnation Game by Clive Barker?
The prologue of that story is set in Warsaw, 1945. The war was ending, but the true Hell was only beginning.
Your writing here is like a an Ancient Roman version.
Visceral and beautifully horrific
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Thank you so much. No, I hadn’t read that piece, but I’m about to order it, now that you’ve suggested it. My TBR list is growing deep. I’m devouring books like crazy of late. Thanks for the book recommendation and the kind words.
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A good read
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Thank you!
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